济南雅思培训分享2017雅思写作范文：控制媒体暴力
       The government should control the amount of violence in films and on television in order to decrease the violent crimes in society. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this issue?
       政府应该控制电影电视上暴力镜头的数量，为了减少社会暴力犯罪。你在多大程度上同意或不同意这个问题?
思路解析：
应该控制1：暴力电影和镜头是精神毒药。它们包含太多的刺激的，煽动性的情结，这让观众变得富有攻击性。
应该控制2：暴力电影中的电影明星树立了负面榜样，他们给年轻人传达了一个错误的观念，即暴力是一种合适的方式来解决一切社会问题，这在年轻人中培养了一种对于犯罪的崇拜。
不应该控制：暴力镜头本身就能反应社会现实，这是对于人们的一种教育，也让他们对于可能在身边出现的暴力进行防范。
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       Nowadays, many people argue that the government should control the amount of violence in films and on television, in order to reduce social crimes. In my view, this assertion is partially wise, and my reasons would be explored as below.
Admittedly, there are many good reasons for controlling the amount of violence in films and on television. First, violent films and television are mental poisons for the audience It is because they contains numerous of erotic, corrupt and provoking episode, with long exposure to which, viewers might become aggressive and eccentric. In addition, violence contents set negative role models for young viewers, especially the youth. Activities like fighting, shooting or killing done by movie stars send teenagers a wrong message that violence is an effective or even essential solution to all troubles. Therefore, these youngsters with immature minds begin to admire violence and disrespect social rules, which leads to the increasing of the juvenile delinquents. According to the analysis above, it is clear that the measure of limiting violent information on media should be encouraged, for the reason that it can directly cut off the access to those illegal and evil behaviors and thoughts, thus keeping people from imitating them.
       Advocates claim that the practice of controlling the amount of violence in mass media is a brazen violation of the people's basic right to know the truth of the world. For example, some films contain some violence, but they reflect the things happened around us. Rather than producing negative effects on audience, to some extent, these films educate them. Furthermore, violence in films or on television programs cultivates people's senses of crisis and responsibility, which makes ordinary people and police work better for public security. Consequently, it is irresponsible and foolish to blame the media for violence in our society.

 As far as I am concern, I strongly believe that the amount of violence in films and TV should be controlled. At the same time, we cannot deny the advantages brought by them. And the best policy is to develop the merits of the violent films and television, while grading and filtering them.

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